ummm...uh....i am speechless...

very nicely done. i wish it was longer.

I like the style of the sprites, very original.

the playability is very very well done. i was about to say it's to easy but as soon as the spikes were introduced it became a perfect challenge, very original and high concept.

one thing, i can jump over the pipes, you may wanna fix it so it creates more of a challenge.

other than that, very nice. well done. an instant keeper.

But i don't think it completely followed through to completion...

I have to agree with everyone else in saying that your enemies are entirely too strong, making to game a little bit of a pain to go through.

But the first thing i noticed was that it is a very very very slow game, you really need to work on learning how to compress your flash animations so that it doesn't put so much stress on the users computer...and i am running a pretty beefy computer.

the comic panels show you know how to draw, something that didn't translate through to the actual game. please take more time in make the game nice and presentable.

so to recap, work on making enemies easier to kill. work on compressing aniamtin so my computer isn't blowing up, and work cleanliness in your drawings for the game.

other than that you got a good concept, mabye add some more moves for the next one.

good luck

generally i like it, you do need to work on your execution though, work on your voice, give your ryhmes a personality. i think that's what holds you back from being really really good, that and probably the ryhmes themselves.

It helps me to get really really high and then rap about anything and everything in front of me.

but otherwise really good.